Well done to Himaya who really thought carefully and followed instructions today in writing. Here is her show not tell description about Kiwiana. The children were not allowed to tell the reader what they were writing about until the end of their description.
The balls of whero burst from the sweet smelling branches. The strands of red are all in beautiful bunches.
The branches spread out over me and the flower strands sprinkle over my blowing hair.
The smells of fresh leaves and old bark stop my in my tracks.
Leaves rustle and flutter to the ground in the cool breeze.
Pohutakawa, the beautiful tree of New Zealand.
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